吃饭不香满脑子都是期待：高考英语作文怎么从18分考到24分呢

摘要：观点独特新颖：在立意上要深入思考，展现独特的见解和思维深度。例如，在讨论环保问题时，不仅要提到常见的措施，还可结合社会发展、科技进步等方面提出更具前瞻性的观点。

文/刘宝彩/天津

要将高考英语作文从18分提升到24分，可以从以下三个方面入手：

第一方面，增加内容深度

（一）观点独特新颖：在立意上要深入思考，展现独特的见解和思维深度。例如，在讨论环保问题时，不仅要提到常见的措施，还可结合社会发展、科技进步等方面提出更具前瞻性的观点。

（二）论据丰富有力：用具体的事例、数据、名人名言等支持观点。如写“坚持的重要性”，可列举爱迪生发明电灯的例子，说明他通过无数次坚持最终取得成功。

第二方面，英语逻辑思维技巧表达及其形式的训练

（一）逻辑思维技巧表达

四种逻辑轮换用，才能把英语写作阐述清楚：①一因一果；②一因多果；③多因一果；④多因多果。

（二）逻辑思维形式的训练

以重点提示观点为中心，左找原因，右找结果，即：原因句←提示句→结果句。其形式是通过语法形式表达出来，（如定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句等）。像是：“I’d like to read the book which is very interesting to me.”（我愿意看这本书是因为感兴趣。或：这本书令我有趣味，所以我喜欢看。）

第三方面，学习英语逻辑思维写作专家的文章

（一）象逻辑性非常强的《英语新概念》第三和四册文章，以及经过英语专家审定的高中课文及其阅读文章。其中：学习结构、语言表达、观点阐述等，运用到自己的写作中。

（二）多练习熟能升巧升快

多进行限时训练：按照高考作文的时间要求训练，提高写作质量和速度，所以培养出在规定时间内完成高质量英语作文的能力。

（三）注重英语逻辑思维写作框架的运用

引出主题→阐述观点→详细论述分论点→提出建议/措施→总结全文末尾重申观点/点题，因此文章层次分明、逻辑清晰，因此可以提升英语语言表达水平。

从以上三个方面看出，学生不要高分都不行！优秀英语写作会“塞进”你的手里。

为此根据三方面要求，给大考生写一篇英语作文为证，其题目：以道路安全演讲为题（Speech to deliver on road safety）写英语作文（430字）如下。为此作为高分英语大考作文范文的推荐，助大考生一臂之力。

Children want to live a happy life by having good health. This keeps them in safety with roads to protect oneself from traffic risk. I finds it right of them to be taught to walk in sidewalk or on the right side of road. They are through zebra crossing at all major intersections according to traffic lights to have been placed.

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教会娃娃如何过斑马线

One notices he or she will be led in safety to take a pass through the crossing-roads without traffic lights, when vehicular traffic grows heavily. This shows children are not allowed to stay and sit or lie in highway or on motorway, play in a fight with their fellows in streets and roads, and go here and there to run in chase of each other by a crossing road at will or suddenly.

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不要让孩子在机动车道路上玩耍

They are without chasing vehicles, catching hold of the slowly going vehicle, stopping them from being driven or throwing something on them. One of them is not allowed to use such a sliding tool as skateboards or roller skates on a road. Under no circumstances, does one cross safety isolation belt or sit one it. Nor does one go on his/her wrong way to drive on the road section with isolation belt.

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不要跨越交通隔离带

A preschool child passes on the road, led by his or her guardian in charge of taking care of the child under his/her protection. At its station one gets in or off a bus, one by one, for which to wait to stop completely. Please do not stop vehicles from being driven on motorway to take them. One allows to get off or on vehicles on the right of motorway without putting any part of his or her body out of bus to take anytime.

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小孩上下公交车大人要照顾好

In comparison by this, one is to wear a helmet when riding a motorcycle. And at no time is one allowed to stand on freight vehicles, when taking, or sit on its carriage backboard. Do not stay crowed to get on or off bus in good order. As seen from this, students are not asked to go to school by taking private car that is scrapped and overcrowding.

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骑行摩托车手要头戴钢盔

Students’ personal safety relates with happiness and peace to get for thousands of family. This makes society in harmony with stability. To achieve strongly-healthy growth, they are expected to work hard at acquiring knowledge about common sense legally in road-traffic safety. Everyone must remember caring for life anytime when to enjoy here-&-there travel that remains in safety. I wish you advanced in taking lessons, peaceful in health and happy in living life.

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