摘要：I am MAO Lu-yi, one of pupils from HONG YUAN primary school, Heping District, TIANJIN. And I am pleased to be here and talk to you

文/刘宝彩/天津

Good morning ! Your excellencies teachers & friends,

I am MAO Lu-yi, one of pupils from HONG YUAN primary school, Heping District, TIANJIN. And I am pleased to be here and talk to you about such topic as color of the world. I want to let you know that it is good to keep the color of the world green. This tells all of you that my favorite color is green.

It means friendly environment. So more trees and grass need planting once a year. And then they turn green fast in Spring. For this, I as one of pupils should learn how to take care of the flowers by growing them in some seasons. At times, they help people know the world looked bright green.

This sounds interesting to people. The vividly-green world not only pleases the eyes but also inspires people to step outside and enjoy physical activities. This makes me to think it nice of people to do some sporting in the fields. This helps bring health to people who feel happy to live a life. As is shown to you, that they are full of hope for bright future.

How important the color of the world becomes green! It enables me to become eager to go out and experience the beauty of nature, by playing sports to catch perfect sight of the green world, to turn me favourable to growing healthy with enough sunlight, I’m sure.

Thank you so much for your listening to me !

这篇英语作文就是采用英语逻辑思维方法写作出来的，所以从两方法面叙述达到了理想的目标：一、主题积极——围绕“绿色”展开，传达了爱护环境、多种植树木花草以保持世界绿色的理念，主题具有积极意义，倡导环保意识，符合当下可持续发展和生态保护的大趋势：二、情感真挚——作者直接表明“my favorite color is green”，并阐述绿色与环境、体育锻炼及其生活的联系，能感受到作者对绿色发自内心的喜爱，情感表达真挚。

总结：

一、文章开头便清晰表明演讲主题是“color of the world”（世界的颜色），并直接阐述观点 “it is good to keep the color of the world green”（让世界保持绿色是好的），使听众迅速了解核心内容，符合演讲表达的逻辑需求，能够快速抓住听众注意力。

二、观点阐述逐步深入：先解释绿色意味着友好的环境，由此自然地引出需要每年种植更多树木和草的行动，接着讲述作为学生应学习照顾花卉 ，从宏观的环境概念逐步细化到个人可采取的行动，逻辑层次较为清晰。

三、强调绿色的积极影响：进一步从视觉享受（“pleases the eyes”）和激励人们进行户外活动（“inspires people to step outside and enjoy physical activities”）两个方面，阐述绿色世界带来的好处，并说明户外活动对人们健康和生活的积极作用。

四、最后强调世界绿色的重要性，层层递进地论述观点，不断强化核心论点。

五、结尾总结，呼应主题：结尾通过“How important the color of the world becomes green!” 再次强调绿色世界的重要性，对前文进行总结，与开头点明的主题形成呼应，整体逻辑较为完整。这就达到了英语写作表达的目的：我心中的世界底色是绿色；让世界永葆绿意；钟情绿色守护美好世界。由此解决——咋写“世界最美绿色，绘就人们健康 幸福生活光明希望”的英语作文——之问题了。

编辑语：

《咋写“世界最美绿色 绘就人们健康 幸福生活光明希望”的英语作文》一文：是一个小学生关于世界颜色的演讲，强调了绿色环境对人们健康和幸福生活的重要性。文章结构清晰，观点层层递进，情感真挚。

1. 主题阐述：文章开头表明世界的颜色是绿色，强调了保持绿色环境的重要性。

2. 行动倡议：种植更多树木和花草，学生们应该学习如何照顾花卉，促进绿色环境的形成。

3. 绿色的益处：绿色环境不仅对人们的身体健康有益，还能给人们带来好心情，对未来充满希望。

4. 文章结构：文章结构清晰，层层递进，结尾总结，呼应主题。

来源：原创英语写作范文