摘要：从该题目看，考生/学生要求围绕“学生认为的不容易的”条件，考虑主题的内容发生的原因，一定是困难的事情，所以设想了“一家三代人”之间的矛盾，例如就教育孙子的方法不同，展开英语写作故事的“导火索”描述，及过程和因果和行为及其对话等进行阐述。在过程中，学生使用概念、

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思维海阔凭逻辑“跃”，思辨天高任英语写作“飞”。为此写一篇英文作文题目是：当爸爸不容易！（It is difficult to be a father!）

从该题目看，考生/学生要求围绕“学生认为的不容易的”条件，考虑主题的内容发生的原因，一定是困难的事情，所以设想了“一家三代人”之间的矛盾，例如就教育孙子的方法不同，展开英语写作故事的“导火索”描述，及过程和因果和行为及其对话等进行阐述。在过程中，学生使用概念、分析和推理中做到准确描述。为此请看英语写作真实故事如下。

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One morning a little boy wanted to go out of his house to play but his father didn’t let him out.

When the father was tied up with something urgent, the child went out for a play long time.

When he came back home after the play, his father has been angry so much, and said to the boy. Don’t go out any more, remember you should do what I want you to do! The boy said nothing about this to his father.

But next afternoon when he is going rushing out of his house, his father spoke up to the boy "stop going out!","No" the boy answered. My friends are waiting for me at the outside courtyard”The father said “Today you do not play at all, and you should stay home.”

At last the boy was crying with anger at what his father did, and tears were coming out of the boy’s eyes.

My loving child, the father walked to him and said. I am your father and you should listen to me.

And the boy was replying to his father. Just this morning I have already asked my grandfather and he allows me to go out to play, you should at first listen to your father, too.

上述英语作文可以看出：没有模板痕迹（如：In this case, However, In my view, I take it for granted that… Therefore, it is high time that … In a word, it may be said without doubt that … So）等；而只有文章大意推理判断以及在组织文章结构，补充细节以增加文章的衔接和连贯性方面集中“工匠”思维方面下功夫的内容。

总结：

英语作文要“泻模板之火攻范文之误”， 养逻辑思维之阳。那么优秀英语作文硬性需求者，获得意外操作之宝——高分精彩英语写作来招手。学写英语思维优秀作文会助考生得接近满分。享受高分之美！英语逻辑思维写作法给高考生的是，释放逻辑规则的英语思维写作文之“无形”力量。

写作上述英语作文，学生能够结合现实生活内容作思考；这是通过逻辑思维的各种形式来实现的，例如：本文写作英语作文其中的句子包括：…remember you should do what I want you to do! He allows me to go out to play…，就是逻辑单句“5.38”句，及逻辑组句，和暗逻辑如逻辑代词this, him, his…等形式的表达。

因此没有被“模板范文”所“掐住学生的脖子”，控制其思维。如此才能真正自然地做到：借助熟悉的内容，用英语逻辑写作文，能绘出思维画卷而送高分作文！

编辑语：

《借助熟悉的内容 用英语逻辑写作文 为什么能绘出思维画卷送高分作文》一文阐述：英语作文故事的主人公一一父亲的责任和挑战是一个永恒的话题，尤其是在家庭三代人的互动中。通过一个小男孩的视角，探讨了父亲在教育孩子和处理家庭关系方面的困难。

1. 家庭矛盾的产生；2. 孩子的反抗；3. 家庭引发了三代人之间关于教育方法和家庭权威的冲突；4. 故事的启示：这个故事展示有必要强调家庭成员之间沟通和理解的重要性。在家庭关系中，需要尊重彼此的观点和感受，共同努力寻找解决问题的方法。

来源：原创英语写作范文