摘要：英语写作，学生实现英语逻辑思维写作自主，就是最大幸福。到欧洲到美国，你发现英语为母语的媒体人，他们英语写作比我们潇洒，因为不用模板写英语，而用逻辑思维。中国学生每年产出模板套作数量达“世界之最”，为此大考判卷老师给“模板套作”降低档次扣分数。

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英语写作，学生实现英语逻辑思维写作自主，就是最大幸福。到欧洲到美国，你发现英语为母语的媒体人，他们英语写作比我们潇洒，因为不用模板写英语，而用逻辑思维。中国学生每年产出模板套作数量达“世界之最”，为此大考判卷老师给“模板套作”降低档次扣分数。

所以我们要实现真正的英语逻辑思维战略自主，真正解决——对英语写作和阅读，——就都不怕了。就要从英语逻辑思维单句及其组句短文开始练习具体训练步骤方法如下，先看训练结果的两个示例：

示例一

By collaborating with native English speakers to explore methods of writing compositions based on logic, we have realized that, over several decades, implied or explicit efforts to shape or change imitation - based writing have not been successful.（通过与以英语为母语的人士合作，探索基于逻辑来撰写作文的方法，我们意识到，在过去的几十年里，那些或隐含或明确的、旨在塑造或改变基于模仿的写作方式的努力并未取得成功。）

示例二

This logic-based composition in English would be expected to be a major player in China for applying it in education, in the foreseeable future, as well as on the world-wide stage to our benefit for developing foreign-country relationships on some fields cooperation economically and diplomatically, etc.（在可预见的未来，这种基于逻辑的英语写作方式有望在中国的教育应用领域中发挥重要作用，同时在国际舞台上，它也有利于我们通过在经济、外交等一些领域的合作来发展与其他国家的关系。）

解决英语逻辑思维写作方法，本文分两部分讲解：一、分步骤讲解；二、依据分步骤讲解，再写出英语逻辑思维组句或英语作文微型文。

一、分两个步骤讲解英语逻辑思维写作

第一步骤：写出三个逻辑单句

①主 + 谓 + 宾（名/代词）+ 补足语（过去分词）

They got her widely admired.

他们普遍地佩服她（她得到他们普遍地佩服）。

②主 + 谓 + 宾（名/代词）

Lily wrote a fine work, last year.

莉莉去年写了一篇佳作。

③主 + 系 + 表 + 介词词组

The fine work is popular with most readers（from the School Book-reading Club）.

这受到（学校读书俱乐部）多数读者喜爱/欢迎。

第二步骤：写出三个逻辑单句的组合句

①They got her widely admired as one of students Lily ②who wrote fine work, last year, ③which is popular with most readers from the School Book-reading Club.

第一种中译：（之所以）他们普遍地佩服莉莉，因为（who）她去年写了一篇佳作，为此（which）受到（学校读书俱乐部）多数读者喜爱/欢迎。

第二种中译：（因为who）莉莉去年写了一篇佳作，所以他们普遍地佩服她，因为（which）这篇佳作受到（学校读书俱乐部）多数读者喜爱/欢迎。

注意：中文的“因为”之后的who和which的使用，和“所以”或“为此”之后的which的使用就是“中文对应英文”的表达。例如：They got her widely admired as one of students Lily who wrote fine work, last year, which is popular with most readers from the School Book-reading Club.

二、按照上述第一和第二步骤的方法，举例七个英语逻辑思维组句/英语微型文如下：

第一个：英语逻辑思维组句/英语微型文

The soldier had two horses shot under him.→ E6-6-8-1

这个士兵曾有过两匹马战死在其胯下。

Confidential information on a course of action to disclose to the outsider, the soldier had two horses shot under him. This means the secret plan fails to be put into operation.

由于对外行动路线秘密信息对外泄露了，（所以）这个士兵曾有过两匹马战死在其胯下。为此秘密计划没有得到实施。

注意：中文的“由于”= noun + to do...形式, 如...information...+to disclose...的使用和“为此”= This means ...主谓结构句的使用就是“中文（‘由于’、‘为此’）对应英文”的表达。例如，Confidential information on a course of action to disclose to the outsider, the soldier had two horses shot under him. This means the secret plan fails to be put into operation.

第二个：英语逻辑思维组句/英语微型文

I have ever heard Italian spoken. → E6-6-8-2

我曾听过人说意大利话。

I heard Italian spoken during my visit to European countries. This helps me make friend with Italian.

我曾因出访欧洲国家，所以听过人说意大利话。由此帮我跟意大利人交朋友。

注意：中文的“因为”= ..介词短语...形式, 如during my visit to...的使用和“由此”= 主谓宾补结构句形式, 如This helps me...的使用就是“中文（‘因为’、‘由此’）对应英文”的表达。例如， I heard Italian spoken during my visit to European countries. This helps me make friend with Italian.

第三个：英语逻辑思维组句/英语微型文

She has them printed in the factory→ E6-6-8-4

She has them printed in the factory, where the highly-advanced technology is said to develop fast, helping her products with massive sale in market.

（之所以）她在这家工厂印刷过个东西，（是）因为据悉高度发达的技术发展快，由此帮助她的产品大批量在市场上销售。

注意：中文的“因为”= ..地点连词...形式, 如...where ... technology is said to develop的使用和“由此”= doing...形式, 如helping...的使用就是“中文（‘因为’、‘由此’）”对应英文”的表达。例如，She has them printed in the factory, where the highly-advanced technology is said to develop fast, helping her products with massive sale in market.

第四个：英语逻辑思维组句/英语微型文

His action made him respected. → E6-6-8-5 他的行为使他受到尊敬。

A little girl has got saved from being put down river, by Tom whose action made him respected deeply. That enables all to learn a lot from him with whom we are well pleased extremely.

(因为)汤姆救起河里逆水的小女孩，所以他的行为深深地受到大家尊敬。这样大家向他学习，因为我们对他极为满意。

注意：中文的“所以”=...whose...形式, 如...Tom whose action...的使用和“这样”= That 代词和enables...因果动词的使用，以及...with whom...就是“中文（‘所以’、‘这样’和‘因为’）的对应英文”的表达。例如：A little girl has got saved from being put down river, by Tom whose action made him respected deeply. That enables all to learn a lot from him with whom we are well pleased extremely.

第五个：英语逻辑思维组句/英语微型文

You must get your hair cut. → E6-6-8-6 你必须要理发了。

Appearing present at the wedding ceremony, you must get your hair cut today. This shows you hold the hostess in high esteem or treat her with so much great respect.

为了出席结婚仪式，你今天必须要理发，为此表示对主人的尊敬或对她的尊重。

注意：中文的“为了”=doing...形式, 如Appearing的使用和“所以”= This shows...主谓结构句的使用就是“中文（‘为了’、‘为此’）的对应英文”的表达。例如：Appearing present at the wedding ceremony, you must get your hair cut today. This shows you hold the hostess in high esteem or treat her with so much great respect.

第六个：英语逻辑思维组句/英语微型文

She had a dress made. → E6-6-8-7，她定制了一套新装。

She had a dress made to put on an excellent show, in an effort to develop her creative talents to the full.

为了出色地表演，她定制了一套新装，所以把创造性的才艺发挥到极致。

to put表示为了，所以in an effort to develop

注意：中文的“为了”=to put...不定式的使用和“所以”= in an effort...介词短语的使用就是“中文（‘为了’、‘所以’）的对应英文”的表达。例如：She had a dress made to put on an excellent show, in an effort to develop her creative talents to the full.

第七个：英语逻辑思维组句/英语微型文

Miss Lily, teacher makes them understood clearly in English.→ E6-6-8-9莉莉老师让学生们用英语把意思表达非常清楚

Being always very strict with her students, Miss Lily, teacher makes them understood clearly in English, enabling them to communicate with their foreign friends perfectly successfully.

莉莉老师由于对她的学生一向十分严格，所以让学生们用英语把意思表达非常清楚，这样使得他们与外国朋友成功沟通非常棒。

注意：中文的“由于”=Being...的doing形式的使用和“这样”= , enabling...doing形式的使用就是“中文对应英文”的表达。例如：Being always very strict with her students, Miss Lily, teacher makes them understood clearly in English, enabling them to communicate with their foreign friends perfectly successfully.

从上述英语微型作文可以看出：

奇特谋略！大考考生可以解决英语写作得高分甚至满分的问题。取决于如下：原理；技能；操作工具；操作方法。

①原理：英语是逻辑语言，不是模板语言，逻辑是英语的灵魂。如此看来逻辑就是推理思维的知识。

②技能：一因一果；一因多果；多因一果；多因多果，其操作形式是：原因句←提示句→结果句，即以提示观点为中心，左找原因，右找结果。有了这些基本功，英语作文学习者就可练习操作了。

③操作工具：英语逻辑单句；逻辑组句。

④操作方法：“暗”逻辑连接词词、语如上所述的“注意”事项等。

总结三方面内容：

大考考生可以明白了——老说英语逻辑思维写作优于“抄模板套范文”，那么究竟优在哪里？——之问题了。所以得高分！解决了：英语写作输出的一大软肋。

一、精准地道的语言运用

㈠优化词汇表达：避免直译导致的中式英语，选用英语母语者常用的词汇和短语。例如，I heard Italian spoken during my visit to European countries. This helps me make friend with Italian.

㈡丰富句式结构：交替使用简单句、复合句和复杂句，避免句式单一。如，They got her widely admired as one of students Lily who wrote fine work, last year, which is popular with most readers from the School Book-reading Club.

㈢强化语法细节：注意冠词、介词、时态等细节，避免语法错误。例如，Miss Lily, teacher makes students understood clearly in English. （莉莉老师让学生们用英语把意思表达得非常清楚。）

二、文化内涵的精准传递

㈠解释文化概念：对中国特有的文化元素，如，She had a traditional Chinese dress made to put on an excellent show, in an effort to develop her creative talents to the full. （为了出色地表演，她定制了一套新装，所以把创造性的才艺发挥到极致。）

㈡建立文化联系：将中国文化与英语国家文化对比，帮助读者理解，如，A little girl has got saved from being put down river, by Tom whose action made him respected deeply. That enables all to learn a lot from him with whom we are well pleased extremely.

(因为)汤姆救起河里逆水的小女孩，所以他的行为深深地受到大家尊敬。这样大家向他学习，因为我们对他极为满意。

㈢融入文化意象：合理使用中国文化意象，如，Appearing present at the wedding ceremony, you must get your hair cut today. This shows you hold the hostess in high esteem or treat her with so much great respect. （为了出席结婚仪式，你今天必须要理发，为此表示对主人的尊敬或对她的尊重。）

三、符合英语母语者的叙事逻辑

㈠明确故事结构：遵循英语读者熟悉的“起承转合”结构，清晰展开故事。例如：This logic-based composition in English would be expected to be a major player in China for applying it in education, in the foreseeable future, as well as on the world-wide stage to our benefit for developing foreign-country relationships on some fields cooperation economically and diplomatically, etc.（在可预见的未来，这种基于逻辑的英语写作方式有望在中国的教育应用领域中发挥重要作用，同时在国际舞台上，它也有利于我们通过在经济、外交等一些领域的合作来发展与其他国家的关系。）

㈡增强故事生动性：运用细节描写、对话、修辞手法等，让故事更具吸引力。如，She has them printed in the factory, where the highly-advanced technology is said to develop fast, helping her products with massive sale in market.【中文意：（之所以）她在这家工厂印刷过个东西，（是）因为据悉高度发达的技术发展快，由此帮助她的产品大批量在市场上销售。】

㈢合理安排节奏：控制故事节奏，在关键情节放慢叙述，增加细节；过渡部分简洁明快。比如，Confidential information on a course of action to disclose to the outsider, the soldier had two horses shot under him. This means the secret plan fails to be put into operation.【由于对外行动路线秘密信息对外泄露了，（所以）这个士兵曾有过两匹马战死在其胯下。为此秘密计划没有得到实施。】

编辑语：

培养英语思维注意三方面

㈠摆脱母语干扰：尽量避免在脑海中先将中文翻译成英文，而是直接用英语思考和表达，可通过用英语描述周围的事物、进行内心独白等方式训练。例如：By collaborating with native English speakers to explore methods of writing compositions based on logic, we have realized that, over several decades, implied or explicit efforts to shape or change imitation - based writing have not been successful.（通过与以英语为母语的人士合作，探索基于逻辑来撰写作文的方法，我们意识到，在过去的几十年里，那些或隐含或明确的、旨在塑造或改变基于模仿的写作方式的努力并未取得成功。）

㈡了解文化背景：深入了解英语国家的文化、历史、社会等背景知识，这有助于在写作中运用恰当的表达方式和文化元素，使文章更地道。如，They got her widely admired as one of students Lily who wrote fine work, last year, which is popular with most readers from the School Book-reading Club. 【（之所以）他们普遍地佩服莉莉，因为（who）她去年写了一篇佳作，为此（which）受到（学校读书俱乐部）多数读者喜爱/欢迎。】

或【（因为who）莉莉去年写了一篇佳作，所以他们普遍地佩服她，因为（which）这篇佳作受到（学校读书俱乐部）多数读者喜爱/欢迎。】

㈢掌握逻辑单句及其组句表达形式，通过英语搭配和习惯表达，一些高级词汇和短语，提升文章的表现力。如，Being always very strict with her students, Miss Lily, teacher makes them understood clearly in English, enabling them to communicate with their foreign friends perfectly successfully. （莉莉老师由于对她的学生一向十分严格，所以让学生们用英语把意思表达非常清楚，这样使得他们与外国朋友成功沟通非常棒。）

本文——搭建英语写作“金字塔”才能夯实逻辑思维表达流畅有力得高分的根基——从根本上解决了英语逻辑思维写作得高分的问题。

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