摘要:过于口语化:"Hi, I’m going to tell you about..."(像聊天,不像写作!)
❌ 常见开头误区
1、过于口语化:"Hi, I’m going to tell you about..."(像聊天,不像写作!)
2、平淡无奇:"Nowadays, many people think..."(毫无亮点!)
3、千篇一律:每篇都用 "With the development of society..."(老师看腻了!)
✅ 高级开头技巧
1、名言/谚语开头(瞬间提升格调)
普通版:Reading is important.
高级版:
✅ "As the saying goes, ‘Books are the ladder of human progress.’"
✅ "Einstein once said, ‘The only source of knowledge is experience.’"
适用主题:学习、成长、坚持类作文
❌ 常见开头误区
1、过于口语化:"Hi, I’m going to tell you about..."(像聊天,不像写作!)
2、平淡无奇:"Nowadays, many people think..."(毫无亮点!)
3、千篇一律:每篇都用 "With the development of society..."(老师看腻了!)
✅ 高级开头技巧
1、名言/谚语开头(瞬间提升格调)
普通版:Reading is important.
高级版:
✅ "As the saying goes, ‘Books are the ladder of human progress.’"
✅ "Einstein once said, ‘The only source of knowledge is experience.’"
适用主题:学习、成长、坚持类作文
4、反问/设问开头(引发读者思考)
普通版:We should protect the environment.
高级版:
✅ "Have you ever imagined a world without clean air or freshwater?"
✅ "What would life be like if we couldn’t use smartphones?"
适用主题:议论文、社会热点类作文
5、对比开头(突出主题)
普通版:Technology is useful.
高级版:
✅ "In the past, people sent letters that took weeks to arrive; today, we send messages in seconds."
✅ "Some say technology connects us, while others argue it isolates us."
适用主题:科技、社会变化类作文
如何练习?
✔ 收集10个万能开头句,灵活套用不同主题
✔ 每天仿写1个高级开头,培养语感
✔ 多读英语新闻/名著,学习地道表达
最后的小Tips
✨ 议论文 → 开头直接点题,逻辑清晰
✨ 记叙文 → 开头描写细节,引人入胜
✨ 说明文 → 开头用数据/事实,增强说服力
来源:圣儒公考笔芯