摘要:学习类/实践类(通用):Reviewing lessons not only helps us remember knowledge but also enables us to find out knowledge gaps.(复习功课不仅有助于我们记住知识
英语作文“言之有物中间段”
一、核心目标:让中间段内容充实、逻辑清晰
英语作文中间段要 “言之有物”,可借助 几类表达,从串联要点、举例说明、因果推导等角度,让内容有层次、够具体 。
二、具体招式拆解
(一)1. not only... but also... —— 串联要点
用此结构连接并列内容,清晰呈现事物多方面价值或影响,让要点紧密关联 。
- 句式作用:串联不同要点,展现内容关联性,丰富表达维度
- 活学活用
- 学习类/实践类(通用):Reviewing lessons not only helps us remember knowledge but also enables us to find out knowledge gaps.(复习功课不仅有助于我们记住知识,还能让我们发现知识漏洞。 );Reading not only broadens my mind but also helps me relax. Every night, I read novels that not only teach me stories but also improve my writing.(阅读不仅开阔我的思维,还能帮助我放松。每晚,我阅读的小说不仅给我讲述故事,还提升了我的写作能力。 )
- 团队/家务/志愿等实践:Team projects not only help develop teamwork skills but also teach us to take responsibility for the group.(团队项目不仅帮助培养团队协作能力,还能教会我们对团队负责。 );Doing housework not only gives us practical life skills but also makes us understand the importance of family teamwork.(做家务不仅让我们获得实用的生活技能,还能让我们理解家庭合作的重要性。 );Volunteering not only lets us help people in need but also brings us valuable experiences and new friends.(志愿服务不仅让我们帮助有需要的人,还能带给我们宝贵的经历和新朋友。 )
(二)2. for example —— 举例说明 + 3. so —— 因果推导
“for example” 用具体事例支撑观点,让内容更具体;“so” 体现因果逻辑,让论述有推导、更连贯 。
- 句式作用
- for example:通过举例,把抽象观点具象化,增强说服力
- so:梳理因果关系,让内容逻辑清晰、有推导
- 活学活用
- 学习方法:Taking notes is important. For example, I write down key points in math class, and my grades have improved by 20%.(记笔记很重要。例如,我在数学课记重点,成绩提高了 20%。 )
- 传统文化:Spring Festival traditions are meaningful. Take dumplings as an example—they symbolize reunion and are loved by all Chinese.(春节传统很有意义。以饺子为例,它们象征团圆,被所有中国人喜爱。 )
- 科技生活:Smartphones make communication easy, so more people use them than ever before.(智能手机让沟通便捷,因此使用人数空前增多。 )
- 健康习惯:Eating vegetables provides vitamins, so I eat carrots and tomatoes every day.(吃蔬菜提供维生素,因此我每天吃胡萝卜和西红柿。 )
- 环保:Recycling is important. For example, my class collects plastic bottles, so we reduce waste every month.(回收很重要。例如,我班收集塑料瓶,因此每月减少垃圾。 )
(三)4. it 句式 —— 态度鲜明
借助 “It is adj. for sb. to do sth. / Sb. find it adj. to do sth.” 句式,清晰表达对某事的态度、看法,让观点更突出 。
- 句式作用:简洁明了表达态度,强化观点输出
- 常用结构
- It is adj. for sb. to do sth.(对某人来说做某事是…的)
- Sb. find it adj. to do sth.(某人发现做某事是…的)
- 活学活用
- 时间管理:It is necessary for students to manage time. I find it helpful to make a daily plan.(学生有必要管理时间。我发现制定每日计划很有帮助。 )
- 压力应对:It is important for teenagers to reduce stress. Many students find it useful to listen to music or exercise.(青少年减压很重要。许多学生发现听音乐或运动有效。 )
- 健康生活:It is necessary for students to exercise. I find it helpful to play basketball after school.(学生有必要锻炼。我发现放学后打篮球很有帮助。 )
- 阅读态度:It is important for us to read classics. Many students find it interesting to share books in class.(阅读经典很重要。许多学生发现在课堂分享书籍很有趣。 )
(四)5. when/which/what —— 告别简单句
用时间状语从句(when)、非限定性定语从句(which)、主语从句(what),补充细节、丰富句式,让表达有层次、更高级 。
- 句式作用
- when:补充时间信息,让场景更具体
- which:衔接内容,体现 “那又怎么样” 逻辑,深化表意
- what:引导主语从句,突出重点感受,写出层次感
- 活学活用
- 难忘经历:When I first volunteered at an old people’s home, I felt nervous. The old man smiled at me, which made me relax. What impresses me most is how a small act can bring joy.(初次去敬老院志愿时,我很紧张。老人对我微笑,这让我放松。最令我印象深刻的是,一个小动作就能带来快乐。 )
- 学校生活:When we have group discussions in class, everyone shares ideas. This activity, which improves teamwork, is loved by all students. What impresses me most is how much we learn from each other.(课堂小组讨论时,大家分享想法。这个提升团队合作的活动深受学生喜爱。最令我印象深刻的是我们彼此学到的东西。 )
- 校园活动:When our school held a sports meeting, I joined the relayrace. My team won first place, which made me understand the power of teamwork. What impresses me most is how everyone cheered for each other.(学校举办运动会时,我参加接力赛。团队获第一名,这让我理解团队合作的力量。最令我印象深刻的是大家如何互相加油。 )
来源:Xin神英语