摘要：标题问题，是由一位网友所提出的，本文觉得很有代表性。因此回答网友的问题相关的五个方面内容分享给大家：
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标题问题，是由一位网友所提出的，本文觉得很有代表性。因此回答网友的问题相关的五个方面内容分享给大家：
一、网友写作英语作文；
二、本文作者按英语逻辑思维方法，修改、提升网友写英语作文批改成文；
三、按照英语逻辑思维方法改进的对比英语句段；
四、网友写作优点和不足及其原因；
五、提高英语写作质量的改进措施
一、网友写作英语作文如下：
2025 April 25th Friday rainy
It’s very tired today. I feel sleepy because of staying up late in last nigh I won’t get up until at 12 am at noon. I didn’t put up with feeling sleepy, so that I began go to bed again. I thought that I was very lazy, so that I didn’t have enough time to study harder. However, I began to blame myself again. Although I was very self-condemned,
I can’t waste so much time on sinking blame myself. In addition, I was interfered by my psychology, because I won't a confident girl in study. I always desired to become an excellent girl, but I always went through failure again and again. Whatever I do, and I can’t satisfy my requirement. The other always queried my ability. They looked down me, so I was very angry. I hated them . Even the others looked down, and I would like achieving my ideal as much as possible.
二、本文作者，按英语逻辑思维方法，修改并提升网友写英语作文批改成文：
April 25th, 2025 Friday Rainy
I’m very tired today. I stayed up late last night, so I felt extremely sleepy. As a result, I did not get up until 12 noon. Unable to bear the sleepiness, I went back to bed again. I realized I got a bit lazy, and this laziness was robbing me of the time to study hard. I couldn't help but blame myself. Although I was highly self-critical, I knew I shouldn't waste so much time blaming myself.
That is to say, my psychology was affecting me. I just couldn't be a confident girl when it came to study. Really speaking, I've always dreamed of becoming an excellent person, but I've faced failure over and over again. No matter what I do, I can't meet my own high standards. This brings others often to question my abilities. They look down upon me, which makes me so really angry that I could even start to hate them. Even if others look down on me, but, I still want to do my best to achieve my ideals surely.
三、按照英语逻辑思维方法改进的对比英语句段
老师：
April 25th, 2025
学生：
2025 April 25th
老师：
I’m very tired today。
学生：
It’s very tired today
老师：
because of staying up late last nigh
学生：
because of staying up late in last night
老师：
I didn’t get up until 12 noon.
学生：
I won’t get up until at 12 am at noon
老师：
I didn’t put up with feeling sleepy, so I began to go to bed again
学生：
I didn’t put up with feeling sleepy, so that I began go to bed again
老师：
I can’t waste so much time on blaming myself.
学生：
I can’t waste so much time on sinking blame myself.
老师：
I won't be a confident girl in study.
学生：
I won't a confident girl in study.
老师：
Whatever I do, I can't satisfy my requirements.
学生：
Whatever I do, and I can’t satisfy my requirement
老师：
Others always queried my ability.
学生：
The other always queried my ability
老师：
looked down on/upon me
学生：
looked down me
老师：
Even if others look down on me, but, I still want to do my best to achieve my ideals surely.
学生：
Even the others looked down, and I would like achieving my ideal as much as possible
老师：
bear或stand
学生：
put up with
老师：
self-critical
学生：
self-condemned
四、网友写作优点和不足及其原因：
（一）优点；你使用语言表达较简单，句式单一，表达意思，我看明白了。
（二）不足有两点：
（1）细节描写和情感深度不够，例如，描述自己的疲惫、自责、愤怒等情绪，没有通过具体事例或细腻的描写让读者产生共鸣；
（2）一些英语词法、句法表达需要改进。
（三）不足的原因：
中文式思维要改进和英语语法掌握不牢靠，及英语逻辑思维知识有待补充进来。
五、提高英语写作质量的改进措施
（1）通过学习英语逻辑思维法写作英语作文，改进写作质量；
（2）具体学习内容：英语逻辑单句及其组句和“暗藏”逻辑；
（3）学习英语逻辑思维写作原理和步骤：学习英语《逻辑思维写作思路图》及《英语逻辑写作四步骤图解》。因此就解决了不足之处。也就是说，英语逻辑思维好了，不但提高英语写作水平，而且单选、完型和阅读理解回答问题等题型帮助意义都是很大的。
总结：
英语逻辑思维写作的额外好处在：帮助中高考、大学四六级考，以至出国留学写作“留学推荐信”和“留学意向书”自己会写将节省很多钱；一旦出国学习，你在国外就不会花钱重新学习英语写作了，因为英语为母语的人写英语就是“不靠模板靠逻辑”。所以就完全回答并很好地解决了你开始提出的“中式英语思维是不是只是语法错误的还是只是思维不地道？”之问题了。为此英语逻辑思维写作原理及其技巧操作，对你未来学习和应用英语的价值是巨大的。
这样就的确把这个“英语作文咋解决：中式英语思维是否是语法错误还是只是思维不地”问题，在实践中得到突破了！
此复，希望对网友你有帮助，祝你写作英语作文进步。
编辑语：
《英语作文咋解决：中式英语思维是否是语法错误，还是只是思维不地道》一文阐述：初次学习英语写作的学生要特别关注英语写作语法错误的纠正，中英文日期格式的顺序差异，一些形容描写人或物的特定用法如“tired（疲惫）”只用于人非物，否则出现逻辑错误。前后句子之间首先决定逻辑关系，然后选择连词语。不能用汉语顺序写英语句子，否则出现语法错误，比如：开始去睡觉：began go to bed（应是began to go to bed）以及在学习上我不是有信心的女孩“I want a confident girl in study（应是I won't be a confident girl in study）和看不起我look down me应该是look down upon me等。
来源：原创英语写作范文